Can you give suggestions on my sales letter?

Kari asked: Please help me write a direct sales letter for my new business writing homestudies for attorneys whose clients plan to adopt or obtain guardianship of children. Tell me what I should change, take out or add. Thanks!
Dear Mr. Smith:
Have you ever needed a comprehensive and well-written homestudy on one of your [...]

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